The split
She had been standing there for hours, surrounded by ice.
As the sun peeped its head over the distant mountains on the horizon, an orange and yellow hue filled the sky. The warmth of the sun was a gesture of kindness to her frozen hands, which she clasped together in front of her trembling body.
It was then that she heard it… Crack! It was as if the world in front of her was breaking in two…
My story
Once upon a time there was a water magic queen named queen ember she was just sitting on her water throm. She was so bored so she went on her sea hose.
She had to recharged her water powers so she had full powers. Then she went off on a raide
There were some people who wanted to kidnap her. So they came up with a plan. The leader said “the queen is on a horse race, this is our time to strak.”
Once they got to the queen they hopped off the horse and with her magic she made a water frac felled.
She was losing her power. The frac felled was broken. So the army got to kidnap the queen and made a split in the water.
A prince came and saved the queen. The queen stopped the split in the water.
The end.
Kia Ora Aria, i like your writing about the split. I have one question for you. Can you plz delete the highlighter?. I have something for you to work on for you can you work on put your letters smaller plz, Nga Mihi< Your BFF Misty-Rose
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aria.
ReplyDeleteI have ridden many horses but never a sea horse.I wonder what it would be like.
What do you think?.Can you tell me what it might feel like?.