Mermaid magic
It was a beautiful, clear day, and the three divers plunged into the water
My story
Chapter 1 The bffs
Once upon a time there were 3 kids they were bffs. One day they went to the beach and they did a jumping competition. Aria came
first. Misty-rose came 2nd. Nevaeh came 3rd. Then they went for a swim in the water. They went deep in it and then they started to drown.
Chapter 2 water queen
The water queen saw the Nevaeh, Aria and Misty-rose drowning. The water queen’s name was Ember. She raped them up in a magic sea wede and it turned them into mermaids. It also made them wake up they were really surprised.
Chapter 3 the magic bond
Once Aria turned into a mermaid Ember could see a magic bond. The 3 girls said thanks for saving us. Aria saw the magic bond as well. The free girls saw she was sad. The girls asked what was wrong. The queen told them a story.
Chapter 4 the story of the lost girl.
Once upon a time there was a water queen who had a baby she had to save her. She was a baby so she could not be touched by ice. 2 people named Danni and Jesse took her.
“My dad's name is Jesse and my mum’s name is Danni.
Wall then I am your mother.
The end.
Kia Ora Aria.
ReplyDeleteWell done on using some good describing words.Your story also had a different ending to what I thought was going to happen.
What did the mermaid look like?.